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Eternal Life Chapter 1

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Eternal Life –- Chapter 1 Hidden Secrets

Most stories Start at a certain place, somewhere you can relate to or imagine yourself being. This one starts at a specific period in time many years before war, death and oppression struck our lands.

There were three clans that watched over everything. The Kinate Clan, Tribal warriors with tracking skills known throughout the lands. The Shilka Clan, they possessed powers of light some say from the Gods themselves. The Naru Clan, warriors with strength and skills far beyond the other clans. As always each clan had their hidden secrets.

The Kinate Clan suffered their share of scandals but who would have thought there Queen would have been the centre of one. Alone and miserable in a loveless marriage, Elisabeth the Queen of Kinates ran into the arms of another man. Her husband Kaibein, filled with a jealous rage tore them apart and had the man executed for his crimes. Elisabeth then gave birth to a baby girl which displeased Kaibein. He banished the girl to the maid's chamber s. After they both died Rock, the son of Kaibien, aloud now the girl of 16 to be where she belonged but at a price. Forced into a marriage, she feared that she will end up like her mother but with no way out she had no choice but to go through with it. The show must go on...

Now 16, Lizzie Kinate looks out into the distance on balcony thinking about her situation. Everyone who will see her today has no idea that this wasn't done by her free will. Yet another secret The Kinates keep. Lizzie can't help but think that her life is not her own anymore. As she stares into the sky she thinks to herself this is the only freedom she will ever experience. Her thoughts were stopped by footsteps walking towards her.

'They want you down there now Liz...I can't delay them anymore...'

She turned to see a woman standing in front of her in full women's armour. Her hair was blonde and grey and she had a huge mace on her back. She started at Lizzie with her green eyes filled with sympathy. Lizzie recognised the woman in front of her.

'Gem....I don't want to do this but what choice do I have...' Lizzie replied with sadness in her voice.
'Liz your my best friend I wouldn't wish this on anyone...I really tired to get you out of this but...' Gem stopped.
'Theres no way is there?' Lizzie asked.
The expression on Gem's face said it all. There was no hope.

As she made her way out of the door she took a look at herself. Her pink skin and blue eyes complemented her wedding dress. Her brown hair looked almost perfect like she was from a magazine. She sighed and as she walked down what seemed the never ending corridors she couldn't help but think she was signing her life away...
I did have a ace layout but DA wont let me upload it so it looks crappy ¬¬

Here's the long awaited chapter thanks for waiting
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ReverseTheEclipse's avatar
Rather sad but an awesome start =3